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POOR SCOUSER TOMMY (THE UNTOLD STORY) by Dave Kirby

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  1. liamo3

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    Taught this was good writen by Dave and posted by Murf

    POOR SCOUSER TOMMY (THE UNTOLD STORY)
    Dave Kirby (aka Braces and Boots)

    Near Bootle docks in a terraced street
    where kids played football in bare feet
    stands little Tommy, 8 years of age
    most kids were poor in pre war days.

    They'd have to borrow, beg or steal
    and rarely ate a decent meal
    but no one held their heads in shame
    for kids back then were all the same.

    Together with his little mates
    he'd peer through the dockyard gates
    at merchant ships from far and wide
    who's cargo's had them hypnotized.

    They never stole for gain or greed
    they stole for basic human need
    a sense of 'conscience' did not exist
    thats just a word used by the rich.

    As Tommy grew into his teens
    he'd make a shilling by any means
    he'd steal from Peter to pay back Paul
    to watch his hometown play football.

    To Anfield every other week
    he'd amble through the cobbled streets
    climbing gas lamps with dirty hands
    stealing apples, and skipping trams.

    He'd stand upon a wooden crate
    to watch Kays team of 38
    Mcdougal and Busby played at half back
    while Balmer and Kinghorn led the attack.

    Like all young lads he had no cares
    life is such bliss, when your unaware
    one big adventure from day to day
    just eat and sleep, and steal and play.

    For boys like Tommy, knew not their fate
    a world wide conflict soon lay in wait
    their youth was halted in its tracks
    as war torn Europe, faced Hitlers wrath.

    Now aged 16, Tom soon filled out
    and learned to put himself about
    he'd watch his team at anfield play
    he'd sing and shout, but got carried away.

    He developed a taste for the local brew
    and before each match, had quite a few
    he'd run on the pitch to the penalty spot
    but was unfortunately thrown out quite alot.

    He wasn't malicious, cruel or mean
    his heart was big, but his pockets were lean
    but like all folk from pre-war days
    he had respect for his elders ways.

    The sound of cheering and waving rattles
    would soon be swapped for guns and battles
    aged just 19, who would have guessed
    he'd soon do battle, with Rommels best

    Together with his older brother
    he kissed the cheek of his tear-filled mother
    in his uniform, with his packet of fags
    and his lucky red hat, in his old kit bag.

    Then off he went on a southbound train
    en route to the battle of El Alamein
    to the royal artillery, he was commissioned
    with the 51st Gordon Highland Division.

    He arrived in October of 42
    as Monty's 8th army were turning the screw
    but nothing prepared him for what was to come
    in the blistering, searing north African sun

    They were given their orders, to relieve the front-line
    but the path to Tripoli, was ladened with mines
    so they'd all split up into 12 man platoons
    then tip toe with death through the minefields and dunes.

    There was just no escaping the sweltering sun
    or the deafening noise of the bresa guns
    there were flys in their thousands and nothing but sand
    in this god forsaken war torn land.

    They came to a clearing by a salt marsh trail
    where abattle enraged, on a frightening scale
    the shell fire was deafening, as smoke filled the sky
    Tommy muttered a prayer "Lord dont let me die."

    He reached in his pocket for his lucky red hat
    things were looking real bad, for these desert rats
    the German panzers had attacked from both flanks
    leaving smouldering corpses, of burnt out tanks.

    Then orders were given by Tommys command
    to gain high ground and make a stand
    he kissed his hat , as he put it away
    then advanced with his troop, on his final day.

    In the mayhem which followed, on that hot afternoon
    there was all but 2, of his 12 man platoon
    they were trapped in a crater, left by a shell
    all around lay the bodies of those who had fell.

    The soldier with Tommy, was hit and in pain
    his trembling hand, held his cross and chain
    he said "Get me home" with a tear in his eye
    "Just leave it to scouse" came Tommy's reply.

    So amidst the screeching of mortars and shells
    he decided to dash, through this living hell
    he took a deep breath, closed his eyes
    touched his hat once again, then climbed over the rise.

    But Tommys dash would be ill fated
    as deaths dark angel calmly waited
    for as he stood to make his run
    he was sprayed with bullets, from an old nazi gun.

    He danced in a death like a marionette
    falling back in the crater, from which he'd just left
    his injured friend crawled across where he lay
    but the bright burning sun was now fading to grey.

    As the blood from his headwound flowed into the sand
    his weakening grip, dropped the hat from his hand
    the lucky red hat which he treasured so much
    lay tattered and bloodstained, in the African dust.

    Then visions flashed before his eyes
    of his Liverpool home, and times gone by
    his tearful mother, and his childhood mates
    waved up to the sky, from the dockyard gates.

    As the African sands of time ran dry
    a tear appeared in Tommys eye
    as he thought of Anfield so far away
    where he'd no longerwatch his idols play.

    It was at this point just before he died
    that he turned to the soldier by his side
    he reached out a hand, and pulled him near
    then whispered his last words into his ear.

    The month was January of 43
    about 20 miles east of Tripoli
    in the blistering heat, there was something cold
    it was the body of a boy, just 20 years old.

    The last words he uttered, through his dying breath
    are a lasting legacy to Tommys death
    some 60 years after his heavenly call
    his words are now folklore, sang by us all.

    The sacrifices that those boys made
    seem long forgotten by folk these days
    they died so we could all be free
    they died for the likes of you and me.

    So every time we sing that song
    we must remember right from wrongs
    we'll sing it loud, and recall with pride
    poor scouser Tommy, and the millions who died
    and the song goes;

    let me tell you a story of a poor boy
    sent far away from his home
    to fight for his king and his country
    and also the oldf folks at home,

    so he joined the highland division
    and was sent to a far foreign land
    we the flies swarmed around by the thousand
    and there's nothing to see but the sand,

    well the battle it started that morning
    underneath that hot African sun
    and we remember poor scouser Tommy
    who was shot by that old Nazi gun,

    as he lay on the battlefield dying
    with the bllod rushing out of his head
    as he lay on the battle field dying
    we remember the last words he said,

    i am a liverpudlian
    and i stand in the spion kop
    i like to sing, i like to dance
    and i get thrown out quite a lot,

    there's a team theat we all known
    the greatest in the land
    it's a team we call Liverpool
    and to glory we will march,

    we've won the league
    we've won the cup
    we've been to Europe too
    we played the toffee's for a laugh
    and left them feeling blue.
     
  2. liamo3

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    That is one fantastic piece from Dave, it reminds of another brilliant
    liverpool song

    TWO LITTLE REDS

    Two little boys had two little toys
    Each had a wooden horse
    Gaily they played each summer's day
    Warriors both of course

    One little chap then had a mishap
    Broke off his horse's head
    Wept for his toy then cried with joy
    As his young playmate said

    Did you think I would leave you crying
    When there's room on my horse for two
    Climb up here Jack and don't be crying
    I can go just as fast with two

    When we grow up we'll both be soldiers
    And our horses will not be toys
    And I wonder if we'll remember
    When we were two little boys

    Long years had passed, war came so fast
    Bravely they marched away
    Cannon roared loud, and in the mad crowd
    Wounded and dying lay

    Up goes a shout, a horse dashes out
    Out from the ranks so blue
    Gallops away to where Joe lay
    Then came a voice he knew

    Did you think I would leave you dying
    When there's room on my horse for two
    Climb up here Joe, we'll soon be flying
    I can go just as fast with two

    Did you say Joe I'm all a-tremble
    Perhaps it's the battle's noise
    But I think it's that I remember
    When we were two little boys

    Do you think I would leave you dying
    There's room on my horse for two
    Climb up here Joe, we'll soon by flying
    Back to the ranks so blue

    Can you feel Joe I'm all a tremble
    Perhaps it's the battle's noise
    But I think it's that I remember
    When we were two little boys
     
  3. YNWA

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    Love them both, especially the PST one as alot don't know the story, thats why its definitely my favourite song!
     
  4. redeagle

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    likewise.

    great to hear it been belted out aswell.
     
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    The Justice Bell

    by Dave Kirby


    A schoolboy holds a leather ball
    in a photograph on a bedroom wall
    the bed is made, the curtains drawn
    as silence greets the break of dawn.
    The dusk gives way to morning light
    revealing shades of red and white
    which hang from posters locked in time
    of the Liverpool team of 89.
    Upon a pale white quilted sheet
    a football kit is folded neat
    with a yellow scarf, trimmed with red
    and some football boots beside the bed.
    In hope, the room awakes each day
    to see the boy who used to play
    but once again it wakes alone
    for this young boy's not coming home.
    Outside, the springtime fills the air
    the smell of life is everywhere
    viola's bloom and tulips grow
    while daffodils dance heel to toe.
    These should have been such special times
    for a boy who'd now be in his prime
    but spring forever turned to grey
    in theYorkshire sun, one April day.
    The clock was locked on 3.06
    as sun shone down upon the pitch
    lighting up faces etched in pain
    as death descended on Leppings Lane.
    Between the bars an arm is raised
    amidst a human tidal wave
    a young hand yearning to be saved
    grows weak inside this deathly cage.
    A boy not barely in his teens
    is lost amongst the dying screams
    a body too frail to fight for breath
    is drowned below a sea of death
    His outstretched arm then disappears
    to signal fourteen years of tears
    as 96 souls of those who fell
    await the toll of the justice bell.
    Ever since that disastrous day
    a vision often comes my way
    I reach and grab his outstretched arm
    then pull him up away from harm.
    We both embrace with tear-filled eyes
    I then awake to realise
    its the same old dream I have each week
    as I quietly cry myself to sleep.
    On April the 15th every year
    when all is calm and skies are clear
    beneath a glowing Yorkshire moon
    a lone scots piper plays a tune.
    The tune rings out the justice cause
    then blows due west across the moors
    it passes by the eternal flame
    then engulfs a young boys picture frame.
    His room is as it was that day
    for thirteen years its stayed that way
    untouched and frozen forever in time
    since that tragic day in 89.
    And as it plays its haunting sound
    tears are heard from miles around
    they're tears from families of those who fell
    awaiting the toll of the justice bell.
     
  6. red2005

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    Had tears in my eyes reading The Justice Bell so sad.
     
  7. STEVE1978

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    Brilliant
     
  8. Ron1892

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    some fantastic but sad poems there.Never seen the first one before.
     

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